Post by cagedtorment on Nov 6, 2005 4:42:17 GMT -5
-My Dispise- By cagedtorment
The feelings for her are ones i can't shake,
She is in every thought i make.
When i wake up in the middle of the night,
Please tell me she will be my guiding light.
For her i would do anything its true,
Just to hear her say "I need You".
I hope she looks into these eyes just to see how much i care,
Only then will she know i will always be there.
There's no lies in my eyes, no need for me to disguise,
As i come to realise, my shyness i dispise.
**I know it rhymes, i know its cliche.
I'm a freaky beatnick *clicks fingers*
On a serious note i feel really good at the minute, but it won't last. That poem no matter how bad it is, is how i honestly feel. She makes me want to be a better person more than anyone else
The feelings for her are ones i can't shake,
She is in every thought i make.
When i wake up in the middle of the night,
Please tell me she will be my guiding light.
For her i would do anything its true,
Just to hear her say "I need You".
I hope she looks into these eyes just to see how much i care,
Only then will she know i will always be there.
There's no lies in my eyes, no need for me to disguise,
As i come to realise, my shyness i dispise.
**I know it rhymes, i know its cliche.
I'm a freaky beatnick *clicks fingers*
On a serious note i feel really good at the minute, but it won't last. That poem no matter how bad it is, is how i honestly feel. She makes me want to be a better person more than anyone else
Everyone else brings up rhyming conflicts, trying too hard-ism, and grammar and spelling.
